Isn't it?
No one spoke, but their eyes had already revealed this sentiment.
Wu Mu shook his head, "No, I'm just feeling sorry for Teacher Yi Junxi and the others. This song didn't reach the standard it should have for them."
He thought for a moment, then gave an example, "For instance, at the beginning, 'Sunlight pierces through the gaps in the clouds, the heartbeat strikes a roaring rhythm,' is too cliché, very formulaic. And it doesn't quite match the melody, which is clearly that kind of clean piano sound. If it started with a chant, it would feel much better, but Teacher Yi Junxi and the others used a relatively high note."
As Wu Mu spoke, he sang to demonstrate his point.
Not just one place, he easily pointed out five or six areas he thought could be improved, making it seem like the song was indeed poorly written.
Well, after all, he's sung over eighty songs, he can't write them, no skills, but he can certainly pick them apart!
